Hi my name is Katie and I writ this poem all by my self on the 1st line I writ appearance
on the 2nd line I writ personality on the 3rd line I writ what I like doing I like doing swimming and gymnastics.
Thursday, April 8, 2021
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Great poem Katie! I really like the eye-catching DLO you have created to share this poem on your blog. The words you have selected describe you perfectly. Would you think about adding an image or photo to your DLO next time?
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Katie,
ReplyDeleteI am student from Panmure Bridge School. You've made a great poem Katie. I really like the words that you described yourself in the DLO. Do you think you need to add anything else in the the empty spaces of your DLO? Keep up the great work!